Going to the movie is positive experience
Watching a movie is really a great experience. It is a good activity in our busy life. By going out and watching the movie, it relaxes our mind. Our mind is tension free. We are enjoying the movie, instead of worrying about our daily problems. Going out to the movie also gives opportunities to hang out with our friends. We can get to gather with our friend. We can even have fun in company of our friends. The most exciting thing while watching the movie is eating popcorn. A movie becomes enjoyable while eating popcorn. Movie is a great time past. In conclusion, going to the movie is a positive experince.
posted by PRIYA @ 8:17 PM
1 Comments:
Your paragraph presents some good points about going to the movies and shows how it is a positive experience. You save the popcorn until last and most exciting thing! My wife would probably agree with you.
In your supports, work at being more specific. You write: "We are enjoying the movie, instead of worrying about our daily problems." What kinds of problems? An example of one or two problems would help the reader understand better.
Spelling note: "We can get to gather with our friend." It should be: "We can get together with our friend.:
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